Commenting on group 1

Very detailed presentation with specific facts and elaboration on the questions given.Able to give the point and elaborate further with evidence given. Good contextual knowledge and research given was organized by going through the background of Lim Bo Seng and then the tortures and hardships he faced. Used words which bring out the seriousness of the tortures and qualities Lim Bo Seng has. One thing to note would be to improve the abrupt ending by including a concluding sentence.